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san astkov it nę lëm merste å sanı,        
ıl kęrenlletpöl nę ıs å,
a tol, tol ıtt ę, a tol
 

um sachen it svetjkë schüt ę,
san ta-ul nęk dus etolä sanı,
a tol, ı ıtt ę, a tol


ta mul de dus paläve,
ans ta dus anıomo ęzsiti,
a ı, ı ıtt, a ı


pojomo-ı ul,
tiejon täshmoli tol pafęrii istt ,
a tol, tol ıtt ę, a tol




sɑn̪ ɑst.ˈkɤv yt n̪ʏɪ lœmː mɚʁˈstɛ e sɑn̪wi
il gəɪʁˈɛn̪ɾəpol n̪ʏɪ is e
ɑ tɤl, tɤl it ʏw, ɑ tɤl


ɯm sɑˈχɛn̪ yt ˈzvətʏkœ ʂut ʏw
sɑn̪ tɑhɯl n̪ʏk dɯs ətɤlɒ sɑn̪wi
ɑ tɤl i it ʏw ɑ tɤl


tɑ mɯl də dɯs bɑˈlɒʋə
ɑ̃θ tɑ dɯs aˈnʲɤmɤ ʏzsˈyty
ɑ i  i t   ɑ i


pɤˈjɤmɤ i ɯl
twəˈjɤn̪ t̪̪ɒʃˈmɤly tɤl pɑfˈʏʁyjɪ yst
ɑ tɤl  tɤl it ʏw  ɑ tɤl




pls1 save 1plREP INE ART sickness LOC pls2
REFverb(save) Grundlet(nom) ART REF(sickness) LOC
EXPL REF-light, REF-light 1plREF-pos, EXPL REF-light

will fight 1plREP(nom) side(acc) 2sREF-pos(AGR) INS
pls1 BE-REF(nom) NEG ART night(acc) pls2
EXPL light, REF-light 1plREF-pos, EXPL light

BE 2sREP(nom) ART DEM good-concept(acc)
DEM BE DEM strength(acc) every(AGR) *
EXPL REF-light, REF-light 1plREF-pos, EXPL REF-light

listen-with-sight-REF(nom) REF(acc)
shine brightly light(nom) speech(acc) REF2sPOS
EXPL light, REF-light 1plREF-pos, EXPL light



Please save us from the sickness within,
From the sickness within Grundlet ,
O light, our light, o light

We will fight with your side,
Please let there be no night,
O light, our light, o light

For you are good,
You are the all-might,
O light, our light, our light

We listen with our sight,
Your words shine bright,
O light, our light, o light
this is my translation of :iconjuhhmi: 's poem iceboxyeti.deviantart.com/art/… . I did change the english translation to make it more...um, like the Iri version. The cultures poetry relies on using words such as ı and ıl to reference back to things, i wasn't sure what to gloss it as so I made it REF. I was also unsure how to gloss the 'please words' so they are pls1 and pls2, if someone has any tips, I would love to hear them.
*the word Pojomo was made from the word Bojomo which is from Aoma
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juhhmi Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the honour! :D Nicely modified and translated to your language! Great job! :)

By the way, there is a second 'h' missing from "juhhmi" so the member link doesn't go to my page... Funny there should be a "Juhmi" also from Finland.
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IceboxYeti Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student General Artist
oh, oops. you're welcome ^ ^
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